The motto

"Work hard play hard."

- Abraham Lincoln

Sunday, November 16, 2014

Response to Course Materials 3

This month, we did our second reading of Death of a Salesman. With this second reading, I found that I enjoyed it more the second time. The second time around I picked up on more symbolism and minor plot points that I missed. The sign that something is truly great is when you watch/read something the second time, that it is even better the second time around. One example is Apocalypse Now. While Death of a Salesman might not be one of my favorites, I respect its literary prowess and its interpretation of the American Dream.

Later, we wrote another practice essay, this time on Death of a Salesman. I felt better about this one. Matt edited my essay and provided me with good feedback. I'm slowly working my up to a five (hopefully). I need to work on timing as well.

Lastly, we began to read Hamlet. So far, I am really enjoying Hamlet. I really enjoy Shakespearean tragedies. I was not the biggest fan of Twelfth Night or Much Ado About Nothing. The flawed characters in plays like Macbeth  and Romeo and Juliet are a joy to read. I especially enjoyed Romeo and Juliet because as a teenager, I realized that teenagers make a lot of dumb mistakes. It was pretty eyeopening, like when I read The Catcher in the Rye. Ms. Holmes selected me to be the ghost, and I love the role. Having a ghost come back to motivate Hamlet to kill people is interesting. I hope that I enjoy reading Hamlet!

Monday, November 10, 2014

Death of a Salesman Summary and Analysis

After reading Arthur Miller's Death of a Salesman, readers are presented with another version of the American Dream. This dream is a lot like the American Dream Mommy and Daddy represented in Edward Albee's The American Dream. Sixth hour's theme for the play was prioritizing success over moral values will harm oneself and cause personal failure. 

The play starts out with main character Willy Loman comes back from a business trip and is greeted by his wife Linda. Readers/viewers find out that Willy's sons, Happy and Biff, are back in town. Willy heads to the kitchen where he has his first flashback. This involves his sons, in high school age, Linda and his neighbor's son, Bernard. Bernard rushes in saying that Biff will fail math if he doesn't study. Willy dismisses this and asks Biff if he is "well-liked". Willy then jumps back to reality where he angrily yells at Linda for mending stockings. This reminds Willy of his affair with The Woman, where The Woman was given stockings by Willy. His brother Ben then comes in in another flashback. Here, readers/viewers find out that Ben was a wealthy diamond tycoon in Africa, where he made his fortune. Willy was offered a job by Ben to go to Alaska. Charley, his neighbor, enters and tries to calm Willy down because of the ruckus he was making. Biff complains to Linda about Willy. Lind proceeds to tell Biff about Willy's suicide attempts. The family then goes to bed. The next morning, Willy goes to visit his boss, Howard, to try and secure a news job. Howard lets him go. Willy then goes to visit Charley at his office. He meets with Charley again and asks for money after Charley offers him another job. Willy again refuses and tells Charley that he was fired. Charley, furious, gives Willy the money needed to pay his bills and criticizes Willy for being prideful. Willy then goes to Frank's Chop House to meet his sons for dinner. Beforehand, Happy starts flirting with Miss Forsythe. Earlier that day, Biff had gone to see Bill Oliver to try and get a contract, but ends up leaving with no contract. Biff tries to tell Willy what actually happened, much to Happy's displeasure. Willy blurts out that he was fired, triggering another flashback. Here, we see Willy and The Woman. Biff enters the room and sees his father having an affair. Biff breaks down, causing Willy to not be able to convince Biff's teacher to pass him in math. The boys leave their father in the restaurant. At home, Linda tells the boys to leave. Willy enters and Biff and Will fight. Biff breaks down again and tells his father that they will not be seeing each other ever again. Everyone but Willy heads upstairs. Willy gets into his car and then commits suicide. At Willy's funeral, there are only five people, Linda, Biff, Happy, Charley and Bernard. 

Willy's top priority is to be popular or "well-liked". He puts that over his own family obligations. In regards to his children, he doesn't want them to be smart, or good people. He only cares about their popularity. For instance, when Biff is talking about his math teacher, Willy asks him why his teacher hates him. Biff responds that he pulled a prank on him. Willy then asks if the other students laughed. He says yes and Willy is happy. Also, Willy talks about all of the places that he's been to and how he's "well-liked" there. If Willy were "well-liked" then why is he not able to sell anything? His priority on success blinds him as to his actual failures. This priority causes him to idolize his brother. Ben went to Africa and became rich. When Ben goes to Africa for diamond mining, he is certainly not doing the mining. It's the natives he's exploiting. When Willy idolizes Ben. he throws all moral values out the window, and only focus on success. 

Sunday, November 9, 2014

Hell On Earth: Close Reading 3

At Least They Spelled the Title Right

Considered one of the worst games of all time, Josh Harmon takes it upon himself to review Ride to Hell: Retribution.  He tells readers just how bad this game is by using a clever diction, effective syntax and  details into just how atrocious this game is.

According to Josh Harmon, this game is complete and utter garbage. He said that he could not stop laughing for two hours due to the hilarity of some of the situations. Women are treated as objects in this game, and nothing more. If there is a woman in the game, players will be having sex with them, fully clothed. To describe this, Harmon uses "never-nude", kind of like Tobias in Arrested Development. He uses words like "sexist" and "uncomfortable" to help get across how truly horrendous and offensive this game is.

Harmon's syntax also helps readers get an idea as to how terrible and repetitive this game is. In one paragraph, he talks about the main character's expression throughout everything. He does this by asking a question and then repeating the same "Squint, shifty eyes". This drives the point home about how repetitive and clunky the game is. Harmon puts him in many situations where he reacts the same way. Without this, readers may not get a true taste of how repetitive this game is.

Details are needed to accurately show how bad this game is. Harmon goes into a lot of detail showing the weaknesses of the game. He talks about the cover system, devoting a whole paragraph to it. Cover systems are an integral part of third person shooters. If this aspect of the game does not work, then the combat system is broken. By explaining the shortcomings of the cover system, readers get a view into this broken mess developer Eutechnyx calls a game.

The title speaks for Ride to Hell: Retribution. The only thing the developers got right was the title. To describe this "game" to readers, Harmon uses an apt diction, effective syntax and details about the game to tell people to not waste money on it.

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